That day I was young, but I was old enough to remember something so big. I watched the plane, and the building. The building, and that terrible plane. I
remember wondering why Mom was on the phone so much. Why wouldn’t she just come and turn off the
t.v. and scoop me up? Why did my
childhood sense pick up something bad in the air? I was too young to understand that the fact
that my father was gone on a business trip and now this terrible plane – I was
too little to see that there might be a connection. But within the week I had forgotten and my
Daddy came home. He did scoop me up and hold me.
Then we moved away from the house that I saw that news
footage in. And I grew. I grew to understand what that day meant and
what our country meant. I learned who I am as a part of this country, and who I am as
a part of nothing but myself.
Then they found the man behind the crash. They found the reason for the phone calls that
didn't end with little girls in their father’s arms. And they ended him. A Nation breathed a sigh of relief I
think. All that time Justice was
bereaved of her due. She had been
satisfied though, and I we all had closure. I had closure.
I'm always wary of week 2s that glom onto 9/11 as if nothing important has happened since. It seems like too easy an out for what I realize is a hard topic.
ReplyDeleteThat said, I like this 9/11 piece quite a bit. Your poetic touch does you great and good service here: the little girl needing to be scooped and held that threads through this turns this from the usual 9/11 piece into one that is individual. Also in the realm of poetry or prose poetry is the rhythm in the prose, the alternating long and short sentences, your understanding of the power of starting a sentence with 'And...,' your simply repeating in reverse a few words ('building,' 'plane'), or just simply repeating key words (young, little, grew, etc.)
You make me sound like a genius.
ReplyDeleteGood writers are often the last to know what it is they are doing. They just do it--who knows where it comes from--and leave it to the critics to analyze.
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