I keep rereading (writer's dream) to make it make sense!--10 word reaction....
Variations:"No reason to live," Cherie cried, "unless I have you.""No reason to live," Cherie cried, "if I lose you.""No reason to live," Cherie cried, "since I've lost you.""No reason to cry," Cherie wept, "now I have you.""Every reason to cry," Cherie laughed, "now I have you.""Every reason to laugh," Cherie cried, "now I have you.""No reason to die," Cherie cried, "now I have you." (That's the reader's orginal expectation.)
"No reason to cry," Cherie wept, "now I have you."That one is cool - all of them actually. I like it.
I keep rereading (writer's dream) to make it make sense!
ReplyDelete--10 word reaction....
Variations:
ReplyDelete"No reason to live," Cherie cried, "unless I have you."
"No reason to live," Cherie cried, "if I lose you."
"No reason to live," Cherie cried, "since I've lost you."
"No reason to cry," Cherie wept, "now I have you."
"Every reason to cry," Cherie laughed, "now I have you."
"Every reason to laugh," Cherie cried, "now I have you."
"No reason to die," Cherie cried, "now I have you." (That's the reader's orginal expectation.)
"No reason to cry," Cherie wept, "now I have you."
ReplyDeleteThat one is cool - all of them actually. I like it.